I love your story. I really felt a connection from your use of imagery and metaphors. I like how your pictures had words included in them to show development. I think you could have spoken a little slower and emphasized some important words/ phrases so we could form your words and images deeper in our minds. Do you feel more confident now when you do public speaking because of this experience? Did this speech help your writing as well? If so, how? I understand exactly how you felt in your story and I think your experience is one that many of us can relate to.
Your video was definitely one of the best. I loved the use of figurative language and how you made the reader feel what you were going through. I agree with Alycia that you could have put more emphasis on the important points to allow us to know exactly where your transitions through improvement were.
I love your story. I really felt a connection from your use of imagery and metaphors. I like how your pictures had words included in them to show development. I think you could have spoken a little slower and emphasized some important words/ phrases so we could form your words and images deeper in our minds. Do you feel more confident now when you do public speaking because of this experience? Did this speech help your writing as well? If so, how? I understand exactly how you felt in your story and I think your experience is one that many of us can relate to.
ReplyDeleteYour video was definitely one of the best. I loved the use of figurative language and how you made the reader feel what you were going through. I agree with Alycia that you could have put more emphasis on the important points to allow us to know exactly where your transitions through improvement were.
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